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I
Have
Seen it
Slumbering
In a nightmare
Where all the dark
Things tell me trustily
My eternal rest is waiting
But my death is not the means
To its end I have been summoned
By all the powers of my unholy dreams
A question rest beneath my brow of where
It is I am meant to be or how it is I wish to go
But no one knows a way, I say, no one knows a way
Across a dead mans cold bare feet the angels,
Quailing fear to be for they know in death
We go where they will never meet us
Anymore!.
A graveyard stands as their dark bane
all the men wish theirs were the same!.
But none could conjure their desire to cease the ever
Rising fire!. A boat to carry all souls over to a land of
Restful slumber!. I will not pay my penny here, for life is still too near
Cradle of the heart and I am torn apartWww@QuestionHome@Com

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