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Dreams of Bliss

The little bird upon my shoulder
Feathers of yellow and blue
A little bird from something warmer
Whispered this honestly true

"Friend, follow me into the distance"
Said he with a grin and coo
Pressures of day, they leave existence
As we escape at Mornings dew

We sat aloft upon flying clouds
The Sky, a million copies
And rested below within the shrouds
Of Fields and endless poppies

We journey the Hilltops, far and near
Along with the Deserts and sands
And in the Winds I begin to hear
Calls of crying, distant Lands

The Sunset shines with marveled delight
Over the bright, rolling Plain
The moon reflects in waters of Night
On the Sea of water's reign

"I wish to give thanks, my vibrant friend"
Under the whispers I spoke
"Your welcome", bowed he, coo and a bend
We parted ways, when dreams brokeWww@QuestionHome@Com

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