Could Dracula die from drowning?

Question: Could Dracula die from drowning!?

Counts’ Death

DayBurnt eyes
Turn from scorn
Of a HellRaised day
In an early Morn
LunaLove
the world is on fire
to reach the stars
in a NightLit pyre
WhiteRinged flame
in a darkening door
Speak their name
and live no more
WolfBred minds
search for blood
The Count is dead
under VictimsFlood
From gorging deep
On her LifeForce
he has drown himself
and killed the source
The BloodLine dies
and dark is left
with no nightmare
save petty theft

No demons but
a HighStrung child

I would love to hear your thoughts on this poem if you would…

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Totally ur own Siren!

I loved this catchy quick flow read (although here "LunaLove
the {world is} on fire" I really think it reads better if you said "world's")

the rest of this flowed flawlessly my friend, I'll look forward to more like this *^_^*Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is very creative and original!. I found the combination words to be very alluring, illuminating your meaning well and ringing beautifully!. I love "WhiteRinged flame!.!.!.in a darkening door"- lovely words and imagery!. I am not certain if Dracula could drown, actually, but the image is haunting!. This is truly outstanding!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Aside from the vampiric beauty of the poem!.!.!.(working on something, you'll see later), there is an innate quality to the form which astoundeth and astonishes me!. I found myself captivated by the rhythm and the words joined together to create a meld where once there was no cohesion!. This is beautiful!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is the result of much blood-lust and over eating (Drinking)! I think he could but didn't Van already slay the Count!? Anyway, good poem!. I like the combo words, they are fun!. Don't know how against the rules that is but, we are our own little artists, not bound, all the time, by said rules!. This was a fun read!. I will be watching for more!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The rhythm here is a tad spastic!.!.!. but that is not a bad thing, unless you want it to be!. For the most part this has a good beat!.!.!. I could almost dance to the rhythm of the night! I liked this, it is serious and yet not!. You have an interesting style of humor here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

He loved the woman herself, more than what kept him alive!.!.!.if this is the rock-bottom meaning, then this is a much, much different 'take' on Drac!.!.!.!.refreshingly different!!!!

I'm on overload from all the vampire stuff!.!.!.have been for years now!. Let there be creative approaches! And let this poem herald the beginning of them!.!.!.for gawd's sake!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

If he's already dead, why would he require the need to breathe!? The poem, like you, is stunning!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are traveling on a path I do not wish to go on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

NO!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sure!. even vampires need to breathe, don't they!?Www@QuestionHome@Com