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Question: Last poem for the nite!. A Dark Prince Classic!. How is this!.!?
"manufactured"


Your life to me means nothing,
drink it up as tears overflow!.
Do you now remember me!?
a phantasm from your dark past!.

Bleeding hearts pound like thunder,
is this manufactured my love!?
Waited for this my lifetime,
another nightmare straight from you!.

Feel me like you've never felt,
lucid signs flash before your eyes!.
For all the forgotten ones,
our rage has taken us away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like the classics before you started trying to please everyone!. It was you writing, you speaking!. natural!. This is good!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!.!.!.that's actually pretty good!.!.

Really dramatic, i actually got the feel of it!.

=) Nice job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

gowd i love those dark prince poems!!! =-)

you have poured you heart and soul into this poem and, as always, the result is simply stunning

well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome!.!.!.!.i love this kind of dark poetry and ones that don't rhyme and stuff!. Makes my spine shiver!.
I think this is legendary!Www@QuestionHome@Com