Part 6, the end. How do I improve it?

Question: Part 6, the end!. How do I improve it!?

Perfect Love VI

Turning my back on Him,
helpless for the first time,
emancipated into transience!.!.!.

appalling to some, but what I want!.
Never to feel that divine connection
given without request!. In the
end, all I want is the choice, to
love Him for Him, not merely to know!.

Fear is a complex emotion,
appealing in its entire newness!.
Life awaits me and with it, the end!.
Living in paradise could never be
so sweet as freedom!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

"The Angel Falls"

Forgive me!.!.!. this is the only installation that I've read; And though it appears to be the end of your journey; It appears to be the beginning for your character!.!.!.

!.!.!.I pictured Eve in the garden of Eden for some reason!.!.!.I felt it reflective of the choices that she made!.!.!.

Much love always,
TemariWww@QuestionHome@Com

A reflective and meaningful end to the series!. I find this to be as powerful as anything I have read!. The story is both imaginative and intense, and all of the poems have been written brilliantly!. I have enjoyed them so much, it is difficult to express!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is amazing
I love the complexity of it!.
The first and last stanza are absolutely stunning!.

I think the transition from the first to second stanza is a little bumpy!. The second stanza sticks out a little for me!.

great poem !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i dont understand why the back was turned on him!.!.!.
and sort of an abrupt end to the series!.!.
but very interesting one tho!. it is a unique read and
it still leaves me wondering what Regan will do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful!.Www@QuestionHome@Com