Truth is hiding in a corner (poem rate 1-10) thanks?

Question: Truth is hiding in a corner (poem rate 1-10) thanks!?

Lies are in the sky
Truth is hiding in a corner
For fear takes all that is near

Running and hiding to hide my felings
Truth is hiding in a corner
I stray to say all i may

concealed hate cant be revealed
Truth is hiding in a corner
Hopefully one day i may say that this corner is foundWww@QuestionHome@Com

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Dude why am I the only one who seems to understand u!? I love the way this is so simple but it packs a serious message!.
Its like the world is full of so much stuff you have to search threw all the lies to try and find truth (hiding in a corner)!. You have to also make sure that the image you show others is accceptable so we have to hide the truth about ourselves too!. But we go off the normal path of our lives where we can let our real selves out to speak the truth whenever we can!. Maybe some day we'll be able to say that we found the truth! There's more in there but that's like the main idea as I see it!. The rhyme scheme is the same in each triplet but the form is free!. That way there's room to include all the speaker's thoughts without limiting them to the strict number of syllables!.

People have to stop being so rigid about the rules of poetry and let the poets speak!

I give this poem a 10+++ Dude, you're awesome, I love your style!. Send ur work in to be published! copywright it too!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like the general concept I just can't seem to find the rhythm entertaining!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmm!. probably a 7 !. at least you can write poems!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

hmm!.!.!.maybe 6 or 7Www@QuestionHome@Com

5!. got wat u mean!. dont like the way it sound though!. U mght want to rearrange your lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com