Another sneaky little wisp. Is it slow?

Question: Another sneaky little wisp!. Is it slow!?

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Planks of flooring
creek their warning
steps foretold
soft, shoeless and
I, clueless
who is coming
cold unloving
come to stare
comes uncaring

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Oh my gosh, this is so chilling!. Since the interpretation is left so open, it is easy to translate the meaning to a personal one, which is very scary!. This is quite an amazing little poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, this needs more!.!.!. slowly opening the door!.!.!. and it can then be anyone -- a vampire was my first thought!.

Just rambling where my thoughts took from your poem!. I must be in vampire mood!.

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Mirabella is here
touches my tear
kisses my neck
a gentle peck
oh there is blood
she sucks the tiny flood
then give me a drink
I choke, swallow, think
cannot think in my haze
I live in dark, no longer in days!.

I hope I haven't insulted you, but your poem sparked my own from yours!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not slow!. This is really good but if it were my poem, which it isn't, I'd cut it at "coming!." Then it would be more than a diamond in the rough!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Planks have a life
of their own
warn us of
imagined dangers
like that little man
upon the stairWww@QuestionHome@Com

Interesting and I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Taint sneaky snake!. He don't squeak the floor planks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The dog!? Can't be wife or you have penned your last! lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is one of those you read a couple times to get a feel for the several meanings it contains!.!.!.good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

Always leave 'em begging for more!.!.!.or less!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very short but with a lot of meaningsWww@QuestionHome@Com