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I feel as though tumbling Uncontrollably stumbling Stumbling then tumbling into the blackness below!. Seems endlessly falling My voice it is calling I’m calling, “I’m falling into the blackness below!” No one replies To my desperate cries No replies to my cries from the blackness below!. And so I descend Forever—no end! I descend without end into the blackness below!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Yes, I can relate to this, the feeling that your descent into oblivion is unstoppable!. As to what the blackness itself is, I suppose that it will vary from person to person in interpretation!. This is a really terrifying poem, actually, and very well written to be so!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Now you've done it!. You've written a poem!! The wordplay is superb, meter outstanding, the form a marvel!. The internal rhyme and repetition--forget all these adjectives--it's perfect!. Congratulations on this one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Ya baby! Loved the subtle "rap" effect in this! Awesome work my friend! *^_^*Www@QuestionHome@Com Excellent poem!. Universal quality - one of the attributes that makes poetry withstand the tests of time!. I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Certainly this is very compelling, sounds like a jumping off place, hopefully what goes down does come up!. Reach for the light it is there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Thar's a poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com Hmmm!.!.!.dark poetry!.!.!.great but scary!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com And here I am, waiting for you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com thats how dropping out of college feels for the next 7 (and counting) years!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very good, but only in my dreams!.Www@QuestionHome@Com yes, it really sucked/Www@QuestionHome@Com You mean like on acid!.!.!.oh yeah!!Www@QuestionHome@Com |