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Question: Have you ever seen an Acrostic Sestina!?
Answering questions not in the bilble
Nullifing all sins with a candle
Getting to grips with a new age gospel
Entering a world were God not central
Lusting after all manner of angel
So man no longer flys like the eagle

Preparing is why were like an eagle
Risen up youth, that’s renewed in the bible
All our life, watched over by an angel
I know my days burn out like a candle
Showing me that truth in life is central
Escaped from hell by finding the gospel

Having believed by faith in the gospel
Entering His grace on wings of an eagle
All of my life I have now placed God central
Voice in the wilderness like the bible
Enter into life this lonely candle
Not knowing protected by an angel

Realize you will meet an angel
Everytime you show love of the gospel
But, remember its not just the candle
Others will try to fly like the eagle
Rest assured all truth is in the bible
North,South, East, West all may stray, stay central

People never wanted a God that’s central
Envy, lust and pride and the dark angel
Overthrown, as writtten in the bible
Preparing the everlasting gospel
Live your life to the full my blessed eagle
Enlightment is the brightest candle


Choice is clear, let Jesus light your candle
Hold on to all those dreams keep them central
Observe and you will fly like an eagle
Only, see others as your own angel
Seek and you will find all, in the gospel
Each day remember to read your bible


God gave us the bible which is central
Overcoming candle and dark Angel
Day of the gospel, Fly! my young EagleWww@QuestionHome@Com


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I see no errors in this poem!. It's a work of art!. Perhaps you can become the teacher and teach others in your parish how to do such amazing work!. One minor suggestion: I believe Bible is spelled with a capital B, but you have poetic license to capitalise it or not!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Putting aside my personal feelings about the bible and organised religion I'm afraid that I find this disjointed, ungrammatical and 'clanking'!. It just doesnt make sense in a lot of places and really needs a lot of rewriting to make it work!. Sorry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is an English assignment that is usually expected to be completed by students because it is fun and creative, no matter the content as long as it is appropriate and respectful!.
The Biblical content is a wonderful choice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Amazing and beautiful!. This is a very inspired and inspiring work!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Real great poem love how it ties into the verse so well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

angels praise heaven reborn people choose god!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com