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Question: Ipoem!.!.!.=)!?
I was looking at her
When you approached
You were looking for her
So you could break my heart

Into a thousand pieces
Break our friendship
And shatter past promises
Into shards of glass

Each piercing deeper
Into my skin
Each a dark reminder
Of what you did

I don’t really understand
But I can take a hint
Of what you did
You wanted her yourself

You’re a selfish
Backstabbing liar
You told me it was nothing
Friendship gone


no im NOT trying to rhyme
just something that happened to me today so i wrote it down!.!.!. sure rate it!. but im just writing down what i felt and i thought it looked pretty good!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i know that feeling

"So you could break my heart
Into a thousand pieces
Break our friendship
And shatter past promises
Into shards of glass
Each piercing deeper
Into my skin
Each a dark reminder
Of what you did"

i thought that was really good, you should keep writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

lol good flow i totally know that feeling lol it is a long story with my ex boyfriend lol i rate it an 8/10 excellent jobWww@QuestionHome@Com