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Question: Will I ever see you again!?
MEET ME AGAIN

Dear,
relive
every time!.
Another life,
memory invades,
over again and back!.
Forget the loss of those times,
yesterday is not forever!.!.!.
on this ground we swore our wedding vows,
until death do us part and beyond then!.

Author's Note: This is an Acrostic Etheree'Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This "dream of you" Etheree is lovely!. The ability to put poetic meaning into exact form is a talent not many have developed!. You seem to have mastered many of the classic forms of poetry!. They are classic for a reason--primarily to avoid the disease from which most new poets suffer: Excessive Word Disorder, commonly known as EWD!. You are never guilty of that!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!. I just wrote an Etheree yesterday which I was going to post, and it was challenge enough without also being acrostic! You have such a creative mind and a wonderful vocabulary,it is always a pleasure to read your poems!. "Yesterday is not forever" is such a beautiful line!. I would be wise to remember it in times of distress!. You always have the power to effect me emotionally with your words!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmm very Valentinesy <!.< >!.>
it's sweet i think!.!.maybe!?!.!.for some reason your love poems always seem bitter to me!.!.!.but maybe it's because i know you!.!.!.but what was I saying !? Oh yeah it sweet asking someone to stay with you after your dead
Reminds me of something my dad said "To death do us part huh!? well I guess I'll have to kill you then"Www@QuestionHome@Com

i know nothing of poetry
but some about beyond!.!.
and that is there is alot beyond the power of our will!.
what a nice moment to have heard what you wrote!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Answer: With my perceived lack of syllable count in the line!.!.!.over again and back
Excellent!
I am however, no true authority!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The ending sounds like Elizabeth Barrett Browning's "How do i love thee"!.!.!. I can clearly see the image of a matrimonial ceremony and a funeral, both at the same time!. Interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Another gem from Eva! I want to try to do some of these forms!.!.!.I need to find the time where I can find complete concentration!Www@QuestionHome@Com

My challenge to all who think it could be better, write a better one!.!.!.!. You are called out!.
Lovely, my dear, simply lovely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your acrosticism never ceases to amaze!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Then, Dear, I will dream of you then!. So in that land we will see the truth in each others eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

AmenWww@QuestionHome@Com

When you write like this, I so much want to be the person to whom you are talking!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

7!.5 out of 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

awww!.
so sweet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree with Dondi, this is classic greatness!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it i give it an 8Www@QuestionHome@Com

8 out of ten!.!.!.
its good but could be betterWww@QuestionHome@Com