My newly published poem. tell me what you think?

Question: My newly published poem!. tell me what you think!?

please dont be too brutal!. polite critics welcome!. thank you!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It is very good, Bless you for thinking of your friend!. So sorry for your loss!. Thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I enjoyed this poem!. A very nice write!. A nice dedication to a friend who sadly passed away!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It was very good!! i liked it a lot
rated ya a 10 keep up the good work!!

Sorry for your loss :(Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com