A Poem - Vacant - Do You Like?

Question: A Poem - Vacant - Do You Like!?

I sit with my left eye open
and the right eye closed
It is not yet time to focus

The world is a comforting blur
no longer rosy
Colors can cause a distortion

How I long for a telescope
and again see the stars
The heavens promise a white light

Time will determine when eyes focus
so patience prevails
Until healing has obtained its sightWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You will see the stars again!. The world will come into focus, I promise you!. The poem itself is beautiful although based on a horrible tragedy!. Many hearts beat in time with yours!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Reading this makes me feel vacant, but in the open sort of way, not the empty sort of way!. I think it is words like these that always keep me open to new ideas and patterns of thought!. No, I am not yet ready to focus!. Let me be enchanted by your words a moment longer!. Then I shall fill this vacancy with words of my own, that hopefully will open another in turn!. Thank you, Marguerite, for this beautiful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey 2012!. If you don`t like a poem on this sight, Move the
FUNK on!. You don`t like to read our poems,we don`t like
to read your comments!. Don`t make me come after you like
I have gotten rid of other trolls!. Beat It!.
I`m sorry M!. but I can`t stand these dumb asses!. Your poem
was beautiful as are you!. Don`t ever worry about these
idiots, we love you!. My heart Is breaking for you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is very nice!.

it reminds me of the full moon i saw the other night!.!.!.
it was absolutely gorgeous!.!.!.

and few words could be used to describe it's beauty!.

"breathtaking"

warm regards!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, it has a quality of waking up!. also a remembering of the night before, thank you for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like this little fuzzy presentation of unfocused concern!.
also if 2012 looks back, he needs to crawl back under his rock til hatching time and leave real people alone!. Only thing lame is his brain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hopefully nightsleep left your eyes at last! A lot of extra meanings here from something so simple as we all face many mornings!. Well penned!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Upon reading this poem!.!.!.i somehow feel/discover a kind of emptiness within me!. A great poem will always create a huge impact on its reader!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very well writen!. I really like your last stanza, it truely wraps the whole poem up and brings it home!. Well doneWww@QuestionHome@Com

It hurts, getting punched in the heart!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lame, it don't even ryhmeWww@QuestionHome@Com