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Question: Have you ever felt like I feel right now in my poem "Oh, Kill me now"!?
My intentions are cleanlier than that of the poor girl who I have never recognized always wanted me!.
Kill me now, because I almost can't bear the feeling of my heart dropping!. Please, ruin me, end me, and rid me of my soul, but return it to its proper owner who is not the sweetest and sorrowful me!.
Poetry, deliver me from the wretches of life's quakes, and denote yourself as an attempt at my ever growing thirst for balance!.
Oh, bliss!
I see you now!
You're there, but you're not here!. You're close, but yet so far! Where dost the lines lay between us, a glimmer or a glance of perfect color!. The perfect picture, the perfect pose, but imperfection's where I cannot go!.
Show me! Show me your unequivocal skill and balance, and lend me your inner smile once again, for I once had, but now is only a scar!. What hope shall come will come in a design, the one which I have not yet laid mine eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is by far the best poetry I've read on this site!. It is so very powerful!. Think of using your talents to fill a book of poetry!. Someone ( a publisher) WILL like this stuff!. It's good!. And yes, I know exactly how you feel except for me, it doesn't pertain to looks!.!.!. perfect picture, perfect pose!.!.!.!. but that line can apply to other aspects of one's life!.!.!.!. for instance!.!.!. some people see a perfect life from the outside, but they can't see what's really on the inside!.!.!. which is far from perfect!.
Again!.!.!.!.!.!.!. this is good stuff! Write on, Write on!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh, the Master of Perfection, whither art thou:
Oh, the Master of Balance, whither art thou:
The thirst of Peace, perfection and Balance,
Would thee help to ease and quench, please!
(yes, there is some bliss in your expression, and a promising note! i do feel a common string plucked somewhere to produce the familiar note!)Www@QuestionHome@Com
"You're there, but you're not here!. You're close, but yet so far!"
i get that feeling a lot!.Www@QuestionHome@Com