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Question: Do you think in Waves of Oblivion!?
Waves of Oblivion



Remember the time
When you almost knew
Where a melon sky
Bore lavender sea,
Then consider me!.

I'll still be there!.

I will still be there
between warp and woof
through parallax clouds
As crapy whitecaps,
And fortunate winds!.

And you'll be where!?

And you will be where
Ordinary time
Thrusts wide from the world
In shimmering sleeve,
To buttery Sol!.

And we'll not care!.



Leela Savage
05/18/08Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think this poem is VERY good!. I like the way the poem flows over me in waves as it mirrors the title!. Interesting!. I am at first left feeling a little sad, as if being left behind!. Then, after rereading it, I begin to feel a wistful surrender!. It feels good, somehow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com