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Position:Home>Poetry> Rate my poem and plz comment?Question: Rate my poem and plz comment!? Café’ Moonlight
It was twilight Chilly and a little bit murky I am with my laptop Persuaded by my thoughts A gnawing misery In search for happiness Of yesterday’s history You conquered my mind!. Flashes of hope Came distant about Out of the blue You showed up!. Feeling of emptiness Flushed-out and away I wanted to hold you close Now, without end!. All of a sudden The scent of coffee Gave color for I was Only sitting on the balcony!. thanks!.!.^-^ what do you think about it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: very nice !.you can try more!. all the best!.you will!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i didnt read it cause the lenght scares me and because its about something as boring and blade as COFFEE you gotta make it short and you gotta make sweet!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i loved it so much i rated it interesting <333Www@QuestionHome@Com Not bad!. Peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com not bad i like it it makes me think about all the drama thats happening good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com great poemWww@QuestionHome@Com not bad I liked itWww@QuestionHome@Com |