Is this a good poem i wrote it? its about concentration camps and yes i related

Question: Is this a good poem i wrote it!? its about concentration camps and yes i related it to Pink Floyd the Wall!?

Carrying heavy Bricks
One by One all just
to keep the truth behind,
THE WALL
Guards remind us all day long
No WALL no food at all
I work all day long just to finish,
THE WALL
I went from not expecting anything at all
Until i went beyond,
THE WALL
I'm afraid of the guard who's so tall
But, if i don't finish,
I'm afraid I'll be shot if not done with,
THE WALLWww@QuestionHome@Com

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I like this, but I think "I'm afraid of the guard who is so tall" fits better than "I'm afraid of the guard who's so tall"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good!. You empathize well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com