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Question: Just wrote this poem today!.!.!.!.!?
I just wrote this poem!.!. i dont think im done tho!.!. wht ya think!.!.!?
*its just mixed up feelings!.!.you can help if ya want!.!.i was trying to write anger!.!.but for some reason!.!.the word love kept coming out!.!.yeah !.!.i was angry today!.!.hm!.!.have a nice day*hugs*


i dream of darkness!.
i think of death
im leaving this planet
for the best!.

i cant take this anymore
i just want to close my door
leaving everything and ignore
all this s**t thats being told

what lays beneath this soft skin
so much hatred, life filled with sin
what lays beneath this round brown eyes
many lies, wishing someone to die!.

death is the only way out
no one knows what this life is about

a smile from the outside
anger hidden inside

love so kind
love adored
its one feeling
that i cant hold
will let go
wont just grow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
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nice poem gurly!
me likey tis poem!!!!
=) ))))))) <======Lolz!!! It has 7 chins!!!! LMFAO!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its amazing! keep writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow that's really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I LIKE IT IT'S RELY GODD YOUR A GOOD WRITERWww@QuestionHome@Com