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Question: Whats a gudd discription of someones mind!?PLEASE HELP!!?
it's 4 a poem and i need to descrive someone's mind
compare it to something that thinks alot of is big and wonders alot!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.please help!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
hey maybe instead of using similes you could go one step further and use metaphors, actually changing your mind into this, instead of saying it is similar too it!. eg

My mind is made of fire
can you see it flickering in my eyes
it dances round with visions
and burns hot with imagery

My mind is a torrent
a thunder of watery ideas
it swirls with hope and dreams
in the vortex of my thoughts

My mind is a dancer
with amazing strength and grace
it steps to the music within
bringing beauty to my world

My mind is a precipice
of the highest mount i have seen
there is no limit in my mind
no limit to my dreamsWww@QuestionHome@Com

above is correct, it really depends on the angle of kind of description of a mind you are looking for!.!.!.

a!. a lost depressed mind
through out the fog we float, a mind is an place empty of hope, a sea we all travel, behind those shadows in our eyes

b!. a crazy/psychopathic mind
no feeling, no nothing, this drive only to achieve an empty completion!. they look at me odd, they misinterpret my every move, but i have no thoughts, but my only drive (of life) and they call it sick

c!. the complexity
millions of connections and millions of thoughts, it makes one feel lost, forever traveling this endless path, millions an cross roads and "of the beaten" paths, movements invisible to the naked eye, synapses firing!.!.!.a perfect dance of millions
d!. a calm mind
they say a calm mind ins an ocean at rest, but what they do not see below can deceive them, this is my mind at this point in time!. I have a feeling of peace and tranquility and yet still my mind is in a high of rust that this feeling brings!. the perfect balance of chaos and tranquility
etc!.!.!.etc!.

I hope that helpsand have a great summer!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

My mind is like a spider web with all my painful memories wrapped up and trapped within because like a spider my life sucks :)!. lol!.

The mind is like a person lost at sea!. Deep and dark is the ocean and my mind is all alone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

uhm
my mind is like a whrilwind
moving everything in a swirl
confusing me, making me dizzy


thats all i could think of!.!.i have a bad headache!.!.i tried!.!.hope you really likeWww@QuestionHome@Com

It depends on what you wan the mood to be!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!. a roller-coaster; drawn slowly to peaks!.
Dropping some thoughts intensely!.Www@QuestionHome@Com