Finals Question!!?

Question: Finals Question!!!?

so for my english class i have to write a short poem that sparks emotion
so tell me if you think this poem is strong enough or if i need to do somthing with it!.!.!.

My old diary
faded to gray
the words arn't there!.!.
they faded awayWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

My old diary
faded to gray
as gray as my hair
as I too fade awayWww@QuestionHome@Com

The little old dairy
Has faded away
Since Walmart came here
There's no reason to stay!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The words in my dairy
have faded away,
now I forget
what I did yesterday!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A good story needs some people in it!.!.!.

My old diary
faded to gray
the people are there
the words fade awayWww@QuestionHome@Com