Please read this poem ple?

Question: Please read this poem ple!?

PRIDE

im not waiting for you to come to me my boots are made for walking
im going to speak up loud you'll notice when im talking
what kinder person you think i am honey im the sea
i notice lakes ponds and rivers are jealous of me
but dont be modest dont be sad child im build on pride
thats why in between my legs theres a joy ride
im not afraid to tell the people freedom will ring
im hotter than fish oil slicker than grease and hapienese i will bringWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

omg dats BANGIIIINNNNNN!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.(slang talk 4 gudddddd!!!)
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me likey dis poem!.!.!.!.!.grat job A++++++ =) ))))))) <======
Lolz it has 7 chinz!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, but then again I'm always a fan of rhyming poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

maybe try breakin it up more so it sounds less choppyWww@QuestionHome@Com