The Dark Prince is back. This is the real deal. Is it ok.?

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Question:

"pain"

Slicing slow, not too fast,
taking time, make it last!.
Love the complexity of agony
lust for it completely drives me!.

Razor blades, work very nice,
when brand new, a perfect slice!.
Love to feel the pleasure of pain,
all the same, it's what i disdain!.

Pains the way I like to play,
anykind of misery is A!.O!.K!.
Butane lighters, perfect scars,
butane torches, gone too far!.

Love to play with madness,
being down with the sickness!.
I used to think this was odd,
It's just art, the canvas my bod!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

very nice Steve!! very well written!. I guess we all need to feel pain!.!. you have your ways, i have mine!. But its all the same in the end,, isnt it!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poetry is perfect! Nothing needs changing! Even your body being the canvas!. My thoughts run deep in poetry, but not this way!.Only this week have I met you in your poetry and by it I know you have been there and lived through it!. But somehow I wonder are you toying with us!? I hope so!. You are too nice to want to live with self inflicted pain!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very strong imagery and feelings, very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Um!.!.!. wow!? A bit emo but so am I!.
I like it!. I just don't like razors!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah, its good up until the last word!.Www@QuestionHome@Com