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Question: I'm thinking of writing a poetry book!? Could you give me some advice!?
I'm thinking of writing a poetry book, and one of the poems is already completed!.
1) The topic will be about a fictional character, Suzy, changing the personality in each one!. It will symbolize all the bad things in our world!.
2) The name will be Suzy or The Suzy Chronicles
3) The topics will include school shootings, war, death, suicide, cutting yourself, fighting with friends, bullies, eating disorders, and other things!.
4) What are your ideas on this!? Do you have any other subjects (all morbid) that could be in this book!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
you guys are good!.!.i like the dip of horror in your poems!.!.
how bout a topic bout revenge or grudge!?!?
or a psychopath!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Was she abused by her parents and siblings!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
well use my poem if u want to!.
like a twisted game
boy and girl, the best of friends
from elementary to middle school, from beginning to end!.
through all thoses years their friendship grew!.
they both felt the same but neither knew!.
each waking moment since the day they met!.
they both loved each other sunrise to sunset!.
he was all she had in her life!.
he was the one who kept her from her knife
she was his angel, she made him smile!.
though life threw him curves, she made it all worth while!.
then one day things went terrbly wrong!.
the next few weeks were like a very sad song!.
he made her jealous on the purpose he tried!.
when the girl asked``do u love her!?`` on purpose he lied!.
he played with jealousy like it was a game!.
little did he know things would never be the same!.
his plan was workking but he had no clue!.
how wrong things would go, the damage he would do!.
one night she broke down, feeling very alone!.
just her and the blade, no one else home!.
she disled his #, he answered ``hello``
she told him she loved him and hung up the phone!.
he raced to her house just a minute too late!.
found her lying in blood, with no heart rate!.
beside her was a note, in it was her confession!.
her love for this boy, her only obsession!.
as he read the note her picked up the knife and cried!.
that night they both died!.
she was found in his arms, both of them dead!.
under the note his handrighting said!.!.
``i loved her so, she never knew!. and this time i loved her too!.``
u can change it if u want to!. its sad but its about death!.Www@QuestionHome@Com