Part II of "Time Train." Do you like it?

Question: Part II of "Time Train!." Do you like it!?

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When!?
by TD Euwaite

I finally talked Mom into
riding the time machine!.

“When do you want to go!?” I asked her!.

After lunch is fine!.

“No, Mom, what year do you want
me to set on the dial!?”

Zero!.

“Zero’s not a value, Mom!. It’s just
a place marker!.”

I want to see Jesus on the Cross!.

“That’s not an exact date!.”

Just get me close!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Mom sounds like a person who wants to "get to the root" of knowledge - go to the source - straight from the horse's mouth kind of thing!. Hurray for Mom !!! I do not quite agree with the time though - I would more have liked a happier day like the wedding ;-) p!.s!. - wouldn't "zero" be more like the "birth" of Jesus!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Why the h*ll do you write in parts,
and how long do we have to wait to get to judge it!.
I dont need an exact date Just get me close!.
jinglin jimmy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

HA! That's really good!.!.!.some would say irreverent, but not me! It's a poem, by gawd!.!.!.and I'm stickin to it!

Ya never answered e-mail city!.!.!.it's been a 'shoutin'!.!.!.Glen's deeeelighted with finding those poems, short stories!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Typical mom!. Of all the times to visit !. !. !. sheesh!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

'When do you want to go!? I asked her!. After lunch is fine!.' So very typical!. Clever and funny TD!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes I do, TD !.!.!. but I wouldn't want to go back that far !.!.!. how bout the Roaring 20s or the early 50s !.!.!. how bout to the times this country was actually patriotic!.!.!.WWII times!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.!.!.
The sense of humor you put into your poems is refreshingly differentWww@QuestionHome@Com

Take her to 46 AD!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. a typical MoM response!!
She doesn't care !.!.!.!.Just as long as she gets there!!Www@QuestionHome@Com