Would you rate my poem?

Question: Would you rate my poem!?

from 1-10 (1 is bad) can you tell me how good you think this is!?

PLUMBDAMAGED

Music moving to tears,
My life in gentle lyrics!.
How did you know
what inside me
grips and pulls
to the ground!?

Lure me away with melody!.
Hide and cover me!.
Take me away!.
I'm torn and sewn,
Damaged and glued,
Broken and left on the shelf!.

I remember!.
He thinks I don't,
But I always have!.
My pain will end!.
It will not be forgotten,
But it will end!.

Take me sweet melody
To forgiveness
To my voice!.
Make me speakWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like your poem!. The contrasts in stanza 2, and the idea of healing and forgiveness in stanzas 3 & 4, are well expressed!. I would give your poem an 8+Www@QuestionHome@Com

You know, it doesn't matter, does it move you!? Poetry is for anybody and everybody and the fact that it comes from somewhere inside you makes it profound!. but how do you attribute a number to the way your heart feels!? By the way, it's cool, you know, it's no Dr Seuss, but you know!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am not exactly sure what it means, but it is a beautiful poem!
I love the way that it just flows,
and it sounds like it came from the heart!

8!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Im sorry!. but I dont like it!. Its just that I have seen SO MANY poems with this style ( teen age urban) its getting like sooooo old ( like pop-music, or stone washed jeans) I would advise doing something different!. Good luck=)Www@QuestionHome@Com

9!.9
the!.1 is because I cant see the meaningWww@QuestionHome@Com

About an 8!. It was good, but it is just kind of hard to see a meaning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice!.
9!.5

real good flow!.
love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

7 / 10
I'd make it smoother!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I liked it!. 9Www@QuestionHome@Com

its nice!.
but really sadWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like that alot I give it at least a nine kind of sad thoughWww@QuestionHome@Com

realy good what caught me most was the third paragrath!. 9/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love it and i can relate to it so i'd give you a 10!yayWww@QuestionHome@Com