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Question: Whaddaya think of this here poem!?
I wrote this poem cuz' I was bored!. Not because I just got thru a break up or anythin and im not thinking of suicide!. I am in a very good relationship right now with the perfect girl <3

Each time I think of you
I can't help but cry!.
You told me that you loved me
then you left me to die!.
I can't believe the things you did
And all that I forgave!.
Now I know that when I die
you'll spit on my grave!.
I knew that this was coming
I didn't want to believe!.
I should have stopped it first
but I just couldnt leave!.
I loved the way you looked
and everything you did!.
I thought that you were perfect
who was I trying to kid!.
I gave you my life
and you tore it apart!.
And I wish it werent true,
But you still have my heart!.
So now I sit here all alone
And as I write this letter
I've got a gun shoved to my chest
I know death will be better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's awesome!.!.!.
The person seems to be not so nice, and it's a sad but honest poem!.!.!. I liked it!.!.!.
It's fast, straight and says exactly what it means!.!.!.

Good job!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its good!. kind of reminds me of a song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com