A poem would appreciate comments please?

Question: A poem would appreciate comments please!?

A gentle breeze
on golden face
eye's dark
like ace of spades!.

Your footprints in sand
I touch
A wanting more potent
than lust!.

Your hair that dances
in time
to ebbs and flows
of tide!.

A smile I long to kiss
and taste
to have one chance
I'd fall from grace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

wow!.!.!.it sounds very sweet!.!. :]Www@QuestionHome@Com

question here is this about someone u like!?Your poems good!.Ithink it's about someone wanting someone they like but there's a age difference!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats lovely, you are very talented:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its really coolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its fantastic, maybe you are in love!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com