Rate my poem. 0-10?

Question: Rate my poem!. 0-10!?

i can't seem to breathe when i look at your portarit!.
you left me here
bitter and cold
along with cockroaches!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

sorry, but i'd say a 3
even if i use the same words i can make it better!.
how about this!.

i cant seem to breath,
when i look at your portrait

you left me,
here!.

bitter,
cold,

along with cockroaches!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

cockroaches is a very "ugly" poetic word -- it does not flow well in almost all poems so I would change thatWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's a 3!. I understand where you're coming from, but I feel no connection with the poet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

1Www@QuestionHome@Com

I give this poem a #1 for trying!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

2Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ill give it a 2!.!.!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

its nice but u made it short make it a bit longer so its a 6 for meWww@QuestionHome@Com