Rate my poem (1-10)?

Question: Rate my poem (1-10)!?

I am not beautiful
You would search the world
Before you find that beautiful girl
Hate and racism
It's all hideous
What is this ugly world coming toWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i like the idea you got going hunn, but i think it needs a little more to it!. :) express more what you mean, and you want the reader to really understand or feel what you feel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it but how about splitting it up into 3 stanzas like this
(just a suggestion)

i am not beautiful
you would search the world
to find that beautiful girl

hate and racism,
it's all hideous

what is this ugly world coming to!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

10 coz its absolute ratingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sorry, but it's not so great!. It just isn't very pleasing to the ear!.
I guess I'd give it a generous 6!.5!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

5 because I think you did this poem in like 10 minutes, dam I am rude, fine a 8 thenWww@QuestionHome@Com

ILL GIVE IT A 9!.!.!.
IT JUST NEEDS A LIL BIT OF WORK!.!.!. : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it =)
Id say 10 just because I like the meaning =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

2!.5Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it you deserve more than 10Www@QuestionHome@Com