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Question: Please help me with a poem!?
OK!. SO I NEED TO WRITE THIS POEM OR FIND ONE ONLINE!. I WANT TO FIND ONE OR WRITE ONE ABOUT MY COUSIN MARIAH!. SHE KILLED HERSELF!. AND IT SUCKS CUS I DIDNT SEE PAST HER PAIN!.!. SHE LEFT ME IN THIS WORLD !. I CANT FIND ANY POEMS TO DEAL WITH SUICIDAL WITHOUT IT SOUNDING LIKE IM GONA BE SUICIDAL!. I HAVE TO READ IT IN CLASS IN FRONT OF 75 PEOPLE!. THANKS A LOT!. :)
XOXO - anneWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Mariah was a girl
a girl that I loved
But she was sucked up from this world
And I will never see her again

I loved her a lot
She took away her own life
But now she's gone
And all her loved ones pay the price

But why did she do it
to this I ask you
was life just a struggle
or did she always feel blue

But by this I learned
a lifelong lesson
reach out to people
no matter how small
and no matter who it is
they will surely respect it

I wish she was still hear
but now she's above
Mariah is gone
She was someone I loved

*or something like that
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Wish i could see what you saw
I wish i could of felt your pain
I never realized you were sad
But I see you, some where out there
In the dark or in the light i see you!.!.!. somewhere
You words were fading, like no one could hear
the message made the bottle sink, and nobody could read it
We learned from you, We learned from your actions
The world is a hole, And you have to have faith to climb out
the dark overcame everything in your life
But it shone light on everyone elses'
Because now we know,
We know now to see!.
Like having glasses on even if you don't need them,
you see better!.
And we can see you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i'll help i can relate what u said!. here u go


no more facking it!.!.!.!.!.remember when u said,we would spend our lives together,now so many things go through my head,what sort of pills should i swallow!? which way to slide the razor along my wrist!? because of ur liesu have made me so hollow,on the inside there is now nothing there,and all of this is becau,se,u simply did not care,well unfortunately i'm cutting this poem short,ur reading this with a tear falling down ur cheek,now i will be nothing more than a thought,with as many pills i can take and razorblade cuts on my wrists,this will be the last i will ever have to fake!.


a lot of ppl on yahoo answers have seen this so dont be surprized if u have!. its a sad one because i've cut my self a few times and thought about killing myself but i know its best if i live and help the ppl who think of killing themselfs!.

hope ur not too sad!.

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