May I offer a poem for critique, please?

Question: May I offer a poem for critique, please!?

The godly Adonises
With shallow man promises
And scholarly praises
In prosaic ramblings
Turn me no more
Like the song of my singer manWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I like it!. Short and sweet!. Very nice!. TDWww@QuestionHome@Com

good! however, i don't agree with the first answer!. the whole point of creating art, wether it be your poem or a painting, is to show it to other people, and therefore have it critiqued!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wao, I find it amazing, I didn't really get ti but it transported me to another place and it was amazing I absolutely love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds good I like it but nobody can critique your work I think its yours, and yours alone!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds really good!. I like it!. Perhaps a bit of punctuation might help!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I dont really get it!. But the rhymes is OKWww@QuestionHome@Com

i don't get it sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com