Is this too lovey dovey?

Question: Is this too lovey dovey!?

One Kiss

Two lips
One kiss
I have found a place to hide
from all the mocking things outside!.
Within your hands
I place my key
only you
can unlock me!.
Four eyes
One thought
We dance alone ‘neath winters sky
into the heat, Beneath the lie!.
I would love
if I could try
One heart
Two souls
And all their chants fall vainly through
when I hear those words,
“I will love you…”
Two lips
One kiss…Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

On the day
Knight meets Nine,
I am yours,
your wholly mine,

My love is mortal,
my love is cruel,
it's turned us both
the Fool!.

'Till Moon shines down,
Magician reigns,
Spirit abides,
The circle's crown!.

Two Lips, Two Cups,
Six Swords,
Journey over Water,
Hanged man, are you ready!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

are you kissing yourself!? Wouldn't it be four lips!.!.!. Do you have glasses as well (four eyes!.!.!.)!? Good thing that you love yourself, though!. You should spread that love to the world!. the world!. oh world!. i happened to have hurled!. world, world, world!. i curled over and hurled, unfurled!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have kissed you before so if you are kissing yourself!.!.!. that would just be weird!.!.!. is this for Eva!? Do we both have the Eva drawback syndrome since she is temporarily absent in foreign lands!? It is not to lovey, though, I usually see you write darker things!.!.!. this is a welcome release from your darker worlds!.!.!. when do we get the old Siren Back!? I wrote you a poem, you should run and see it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love myself,
I think I'm grand,
I go to the movies
I hold my hand!.
I put my arms around my waist,
I get so fresh,
I slap my face!.

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Now that's lovey dovey!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, I had to show this to my friends too!.
Not too lovey dovey at all!.
This is honestly one of the best poems I've read!.
I absolutely love it!.
Thank you for sharing!.
Very nice work:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Two PAIRS of lips, ****tard!.

Excuse me, very nicely done!. I think the simple, "one two" makes for a nice blend with the more complex, longer lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not too lovey dovey!. I have read (and written) much more lovey poems!. It is not bad at all!. You have brought a poem that is about love but not too cheesey at the same time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is not too lovey dovey for me!.
it is a beautiful poem and if i could i would read poems like this one every day!
!.!.!.!.!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really love this and it is no way too lovey dovey' as it's perfect !.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not too lovey dovey, it's perfect and really drew me inWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well penned and very engaging!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah, kindaWww@QuestionHome@Com

aww cute
not its not all lovey dovey:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

IT'S RELY GOOD I OVE IT YOUR A GOOD WRITER!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not too L--D--- It's a fast read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very sweet and feeling!.
like it would be true!.
good job!.
laneyWww@QuestionHome@Com