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Question: Poem i guess =)!?
i dont know if its finished yet!.!.!. but i posted it earlier!.!.!. i wanted more input pleeeaaassseee
untitled (for now)
Mask in my hand
to hide the real me
I cant stand
That no one can see
The real guy
behind these lies
the one who just sighs
behind the brown eyes
The one who doesn't know
When to back down
Or the one who wont show
Me behind the frown
Maybe i put on the show
just cause i dont want people to see
I dont want them to know
Me for Me
My mind flies
Am i fun!?
Am i the outgoing guy!?
Or the shy and sensitive oneWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It was wonderful!. It was very imaginative!. I could imagine everything as y were going but i also understood what you were saying!. Rhyming!? Awesome! I also like the flow of your poem!. ABAB!. Lines a and a rhyme and lines b and b rhyme!. It's the style of poem!. Keep going practice make perfect!. I write poems but i haven't wrote in a long time and i couldn't get my poem togehter the other day because it had been so long ago!. Please don't stop so that you'll be very advanced and you won't lose your skills!. Is this enough feedback!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it, maybe like me, you are somewhere in between, and can't categorize yourself!. Keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com