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Question: Do you like anything about this rough draft-pile of unfiltered thoughts!?
Two hands reach out and side by side
One of wisdom
One of pride
So beautiful the second appears
and sturdy cross my face pretends
All its' handsome finger prints
Speaks only of uncertainty
Ah, wisdoms hand is steady still
And in it's burdened hand I thrill
My eyes are closed, yet I can see
Its' love does not stop touching me!.
Decisions based on opposites
Leading only to extremes
Which one could feed a happiness!?
Which one would kill a dream!?
A perfect flower appears a fragrant scent
Candles, music, chocolate as prescribed
Hold my hand so carelessly
Pretense! Pretense! My heart is screaming!.
Dampened letters, poetry; written from the heart
Melt and bronze it to its' very core
A picture says a thousand words
A thousand words says more!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I like the final couplet - the rest of it isn't very original!. !.Www@QuestionHome@Com

just live this poem as is!.

it is very beautiful, sweet
kind!.
you finished your master
piece!.
EXCELLENT!
laneyWww@QuestionHome@Com