on my website, which one of the poems that i've posted on there is the best one!?!
http://www!.freewebs!.com/youngpoet14
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http://www!.freewebs!.com/youngpoet14 thx!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Hi there, Nice site you have made for yourself, Out of all I liked the first one the most : Madness, Sadness, Insanity, more, These are my emotions in motion running galore!. Crazy, Hazy, my mind is full, Overload in my mind, Am I kind, crazy, confused!?! Anger released, do I hate!? My fate blurry, under control again, Future bright to me!. Tonight I can finally get to sleep!. Line 3 you could remove repetition from that line (mind) , apart from thatit is quite good!. Good luck and keep writing :)Www@QuestionHome@Com |