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Question: What poem is better!?!!?
on my website, which one of the poems that i've posted on there is the best one!?!
http://www!.freewebs!.com/youngpoet14
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Hi there,
Nice site you have made for yourself, Out of all I liked the first one the most :

Madness, Sadness, Insanity, more,

These are my emotions in motion running galore!.

Crazy, Hazy, my mind is full, Overload in my mind,

Am I kind, crazy, confused!?!

Anger released, do I hate!?

My fate blurry, under control again,

Future bright to me!.

Tonight I can finally get to sleep!.

Line 3 you could remove repetition from that line (mind) , apart from thatit is quite good!. Good luck and keep writing :)Www@QuestionHome@Com