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Question: A poem hard choices what do you think!?
10years ago today ' since my brain
and heart went away!.
I still can smell your beautiful scent!.
See the holes in the walls when your
anger was bent!. and the smell the fear i left in the carpet !.
Places where my lip was broken'
under the stairs where my life was croaking!.
In my soul in was true you had to go away
would it be me or you' that said the other
had ran away!. why the body only lingers!.

Later that night the plan was in tight '
and everything was in it's place!.
I tried to change my mind' but
but now must be the time' as i am tired
of picking up pieces of me!.
Oh Lord i never wanted to hate but
with all your moods so irate !.
it was only a matter of time!.
Well we cuts the trees and in went
your knees' as we'll be together always as one!.
Now i am free no more beatdowns
for me ' and yes officer he took off today!.!.!.
I told him to stay' but he wanted it this way' so we both agreed!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is a really cool poem and i liked it!.I know it's just a poem' but's it's like real life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like you were in an abusive relationship, pissed on the carpet, then wacked the guy in the end!.!.!.didn't the Dixie Chicks write this song!.!.!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is not a poem, It is quite a an interestesting piece none the less!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
I would like to read more of this person's writing's!.!.!.!.!.!.
Best of Luck and Wishes are with you!.!.!.!.Suzanne!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think - I know, you made the right choice!. Good riddance!Www@QuestionHome@Com

stay strongWww@QuestionHome@Com