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Question: What do you think of my sonnet!?
The morning is peaceful and blue
It always reminds me of you
It just brings me hope and a clue
For what the future holds true!.

The midday is sunny and bright
But sometimes it gives me a fright!.
It makes me fell insecure, as if there's no light!.
I feel more abandonment, and much less delight

The evening is bloody and dark
It makes me want to act like a shark
And drown in my dreams, desires, and pointless remarks
I only can wish to be a bright spark

Together one day can bring serenity and endurance
In 24 hours life can change in a single occurence!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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