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Question: Last poem for the night How is this!.!?
"rapture'

You my noon of night!.
No church can stop us,
Drink your fill,
From my bleedinig arm,
You my only dreams,
The gore deep in my eyes!.

Rapture in my screams!.
Black Goddess now arrive
We;re not evne far apart!.,
We could kill then all!.
If desire tore on free,
One dark and sinful eve!.

Night draws me beside you,
We embrace the twilight,
Your eyes of fire blue!.
My seed left deep inside you,li
Leave me see me lifelessness
My beloved from below!.,Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
The spelling sucks and this just sounds like a depressed teenager tried to be creative in their first poetry classWww@QuestionHome@Com

good nightWww@QuestionHome@Com