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Question: Afinal peom for an ex fiend!. Godd bye, good riddance!.!?
Loving all my writing,
Your words not mine,
lying in wait,
like, a pope's viper!.,,'
witing patiently to kill
opportunities!.
For my romance to expire!.
Lied that you were thirty-six,
Sent a picture of a long dead aunt!.
Laid the blame at my feet!.
My only crime!.!.!.
Gullibility!.
Listening to a chid
speak like an adult
Nothing ever happened,
When you said you were 16 ,
I kicked your *** to the curb!.
I never want to hear fronm
your lying *** again!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
GROW UP STEVE!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.learn to judge persons!.!.!.!.!.!.!.very good expressions of emotions !.!.!.true!.!.! i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com
u seem to be just like the person u r writing about don't u think it's immature to act as if a 16 year old can get to u like that the poem it's self is ok you have written betterWww@QuestionHome@Com
Jeez I hope its fiction for your sake! Either way, I like it!. Not as angry as you'd expect!. Just, well like the title says- final!. Done!. Finished!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh! Harsh writing there! But poetry is about everything, even hatred!. Not one of my favorites but you're the poet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's heavy!
Well done -- you carried off a saga to perfection!.
This is really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com
well at lest ur talking about ur painWww@QuestionHome@Com