Emoish poem?

Question: Emoish poem!?

I thought i knew
Over too fast
i thought i loved you
I forgot my past

You were my addiction
Hands in a fist
But the feeling of fiction
of blades on my

i gave you
my last blade
but its true
it was a mistake

i miss the feeling
the red floods
from my wrists
my own blood

no i dont do this cutting is stupid!.!.!.!. im not emo i just write thisWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Its good but I think you forgot to write "wrist" at the end of the second stanzaWww@QuestionHome@Com

That's as emo as the poem I wrote!

Bloody fingers, bitten, red-slick,
I think I need some Band-Aids really really quick!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah its good i have a better one!. il email u it if u want!?!?Www@QuestionHome@Com