A poem would like your comments please?

Question: A poem would like your comments please!?

A quiet little creek
trickles as I place my feet,
feel the earths buety,
as buetiful,
as a heart beat!.

Mesmorised, entranced,
by your gentle flow,
I know I have to leave
but your strains hold me so!.

Will you forever, be tranquil,still!?
for my heart tells me you have
big rivers to fill!.

I sit here now
at my journeys end
and look deep into
my chilhood friend,!.

I wonder how close
our paths have crossed
but know, the innocence
of our youth, was our gain
not our loss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I love writing poetry and your poem gave me some inspiration! My only advice would be to fix those spelling mistakes! I can feel that you put a lot of thought into this poem, and that's fantastic because that's what poetry is, bleeding your emotions into it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The poem is nice!. Conratulations ! Try to correct all the spelling mistakes as well as the punctuation!. It would be a pity to spoil its beauty!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its really beautiful, whoever you give that too should be deeply touched!. At the end of the day these words should be your own and they are!. That's all that matters!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a BEAUTY and is BEAUTIFUL!. but get the spelling correct!. Everyone loves poetry, but when words are mis-spelled, many people don't take the whole work seriously!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Let's just call the spelling mistakes poetic license!. The rest is acceptable, I've read published poetry that was worse!. Keep writing, it will come!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

a few spelling mistake and the last verse doesn't really rhyme like the rest of them but well thought out poem and liked the idea of itWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very good poem, just edit the following words:

beauty
beautiful

Other than that it is great well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. I like the idea and your word choice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Use spell check, then ask againWww@QuestionHome@Com

nice poem =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

it a lovely poem i really like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

have u posted that some where cuz i saw one just like that!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. or maybe u just copyed it and put it up here!.!.!.!.!.!.if so thats stupid at least put the authors name!.Www@QuestionHome@Com