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I wrote one about sexual abuse which was very good and really sad called Brothers in trust !.The other one i wrote was about my mom as she layed in the hospital called RI P and it was a long and great poem!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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this is so hard! seeing i made some 80 peoms last 6 months!.!.!.okay!.!.!.i think this one

alive

life is but a Dream
until the fingers of death strike you
nothing's what it seems
when you keep up a facade, just to
fool yourself, or the ones you love
it only makes it all much worse, yet
it's so much, but it's never enough
when the bitter chill of regret
is just a milestone away
a milestone of self-pity, pain and dismay
you don't know how you should react
on these Emotions form inside
you don't know how you could express
what makes you truly feel alive

when you hear the whisper of death
in the form of pain and regret
when you hear the silence of lies
what makes you feel truly alive

when you feel the soft touch of Sorrow
and you know you'll bleed again tomorrow
when you gaze upon the chaos of scattered Emotions
sweat, tears and blood fall and turn into oceans
when you feel pain, see the vivid blue sky
what makes you feel truly alive

?2008 ~ShadowOfEmoWww@QuestionHome@Com

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I bring deaths last blow many a time when I sweep across the hull
or when a ship is caught under a wave of my own,
My beauty is blinding when it is looked upon
and my good grace is given to those who choose to take my way with caution,
I am the cause of many a sad heart when a loved one is take in to my fold,
I am the sea!.

I am kind when I return those lucky few back to the sandy shores,
I am life for those that live just out of my reach
and I am mother to those who live under my watery guard,
I am the sea!.

I am anger and rage when I am tempted by a savage hand
or those that think they know who I really am,

I am peace and tranquility when the day is warm and sunny,
I shine in the light making all seem lovely,
I am the sea!.

I am the sound of dreams when a young soul sets forth searching for what it know not,

I am unpredictable when the day is done for no man can tame me or call me his own,
I am one thing and I will always be the same,
for I the sea!.

Its one of my fave poems that I wrote because it tells about the beauty of the sea and the danger!. Hope you liked it=)Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Here's a poem I wrote here on YA that I really liked!. We were messing around with Dorsimbras, and I thought it was a fun form to write!. I liked this one mostly for the mood it put me in:

Desolate

Sit down beneath this dark and awful moon!.
Watch as the tide slides back beyond the shore!.
Feel for the loss that struck me much to soon,
As you passed through, beyond that final door!.

Brought to my knees,
A bent sick tree,
Willows whisper
Behind the clouds!.

Thoughts hazy, your face is a fleeting dream!.
Smell of your skin evokes such subtle pain!.
And burns beneath my bones—invades my mind!.
Sit down beneath this dark and awful moon!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I wrote this in response from someone on here who asked for a poem, for their brother in law, who had just had Triple by pass heart surgery



Windy Day

I watched a windy day go by
And this Tree which the wind blew
I saw one leaf refuse to budge
When a hundred others flew

This leaf it still remains today
Which ensures I will remember
That those that face come what may
Don’t believe in a quick surrender

Without the courage of that leaf
I would have seen just a tree laid bear
But now that single leaf reminds me
That there is hope to be found, everywhere!.


The question went into voting, so i don't know if they liked it or not!. I got BA because i was the only one who responded


Edit!.

And here's another for your consideration!. Please feel free to leave a comment

http://uk!.answers!.yahoo!.com/question/ind!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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I desire to soar high,
And want to kiss the velvet of the sky!.
Feel the fragrance present in the air,
Embrace the flowers swaying on land, everywhere,
but here i lie emneshed in strings,
Half senseless with broken wings!.
Yelps and cries no one hears,
No one cares my eyes have tears!.
Brutal is the world or ill is my fate,
How long for my glee do i have to wait!.
I look up and see no one around,
Till horizon any glow i have not found!.
With broken wings faded with dirt,
I feebly grovel in the dimness of the desert !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

well,its not my fav poem writn by me bt i lov it!.!.d one wich is my fav is too long 2 type!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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Here's one I wrote in 8th grade!. It was quite good for an 8th grader, though, if I do say so myself!. In fact, it was probably better than most other things I've written!. I'm fond of it!.

Catacomb

Sinister graveyard underground
If anywhere, here may ghosts be found!.
No movement slight,
No quiet sound
Disturbs its still and fearful bound!.

'Tis here the ancient mummies lie
With mouths agape in silent cry!.
No living man,
No mortal eye
Shall e'er again those faces spy!.

As aeons pass and ages sweep
Away, these dead the silence keep!.
No rumble vast,
No tremor deep
Will wake them from their endless sleep!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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That was last July when we explored the Dorsimbra!. I wrote a couple!. I like this one, my first attempt!.

*****
Time
by TD Euwaite

Upon my watch, three hands tell me the time,
The mirror shows a different degree,
Forgotten thoughts with words that do not rhyme,
Meander down the road to lunacy!.

Shine your shoes up!
Put on your tie!
Let’s go outside…
And find a place to fly!

Come and gone for me to see, believed,
The ocean tides, rivers wide, crimson sky,
How will I know when God has called to me!?
Upon my watch, three hands tell me the time!.

*****Www@QuestionHome@Com

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here you go Nayan (c:
"GOD believes in Y O U ~ ask HIM!."
The evidence of God and Jesus is in the answering of prayers, prayed in FAITH or OUT of a last ditch effort of a non believer!.

Miracles THAT no hands of humans have caused, except the hands folded together in prayer to Jesus and OUR Father!.

Proof that Non believers calling miracles and "signs" coincidence, but wishing God was real, so that they too may experience coincidence of good things coming together for THEMSELVES and for their OWN peace of mind!.

Faith is proved TRUE when you are so negative you can NOT stand your own selves!.!.!.
so we try FAITH!.!.!.!. and ask for help!.!.!. just in case!.!.!.!.!.!. its true!.
THEN "coincidences" take on A WHOLE new meaning when they become OUR VERY OWN answer to prayer for relief from our pain!.

Proof In a prepared heart that hears Loudly for the first time, what they once hated and CURSED as LIES!.

Moving forward to the exuberance of a new child of wonderment , seeing for the VERY first TIME all the Blessings we were bestowed with all along that we NEVER once gave thanks for!.!.!.!.
Becoming a Harvester for God, NOT because this is what is required!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
BUT because we can NOT IMAGINE KEEPING this information and TRUTHS to OURSELVES!.

You may NOT believe in God , but HE still BELIEVES in YOU!. He Loves you and has much patience!.
Happy Harvest Time~
Debra Zurenda Ackley (Debraz A!. Christiana)Www@QuestionHome@Com

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