Is this an okay short poem?

Question: Is this an okay short poem!?

Stand up!.
fall down!.

never again
will i commit this crime!.

let me die
no one will cry

scream for me
can't let my wrist be

tear me apart
you havn't even tried to fix my broken heartWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I dun think it's too choppy!.!.!.It still gets the point across, and it's straight to the point!.
It's an amazing point, I've told you how much talent you have before!.!.!.
But is that how you really feel!?
xxxxx *hugs*Www@QuestionHome@Com

THATS SO COOL!!!
little tip* hun they say you should never type out stories or poems on the net and post it on any blogs because people steal them!.!.!.so if you ever want to be poet you have to make sure no one has read it across worldwide web!.!.!.
thats what my friend told me!.!.!.
I think your an AWESOME POET I loved it!!!
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Ehh!.!.!.

I'm sorry!. I'm 14, and I'm a poet too!. I guess you could fix it!.!.!. but I'm just on the borderline right now!.

Try getting better rhymes!.!.!. that first stanza is totally random!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it you should write a song about it lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

you succeeded in sending the message you wanted with simple and short information!

i love it!!

keep the good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ENERGETIC & STRONG
Short, deep and meaningful

Nice free short poem

"I'm loving it"Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, that was amazing!.!.!.! why is everyone on here such a good writer!? i suck at it =(

sorry about the self-pity, just a little upset today!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow, liz, that was very nice, so full of meaningWww@QuestionHome@Com

Wow yeah!.!.!.!. I think its really good!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!.
If you can add more!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes! i really love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes it sounds all right to me m8Www@QuestionHome@Com

i lyke it! its rele good!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com