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KH (C)2008 Blades Edge Taps the dead flesh Flowing out life Drop by Drop New life flows river of life life of blood rattling of the door questions of the ignorant sharp tongue of hate must hide this river cover it up for they don't understand what life this river brings cover up make them blind cover up secret of life I'm no English major!. I just occasionally write!. Would enjoy feed-back!. Good, Bad, and Stupid such are the different types of critics lol : )Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I like the imagery the poem conjures up!. It's like the reader is in the poem, feeling it and breathing it!. That is the sign of a truly great writer!. Keep up the brilliant work!. xxWww@QuestionHome@Com It's fine, but you don't use complete sentences!. It would help the reader understand more if you wrote in complete sentences!. I'm a bit of a writer myself=) Some day I'll be famous, so look for my name=) LilyWww@QuestionHome@Com even though i dont unerstand half of what it means, it sounds realy interesting! i love all the details! the words u wrote are soooo educational! its realy good! iloved it! ( is it a poem!? a non- rhyming poem!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com **CLAPS**BRAVO BRAVO that is absolutely wonderfulWww@QuestionHome@Com ******* rubbishWww@QuestionHome@Com Your no english major!? really!? I''m so surprised cause your writing sucks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com good!.!.i like it!.!.!.nice use of words!.!.!.keep writing and posting for me to see :PWww@QuestionHome@Com Good, but make sure u copyright stuff b4 u put good work like that on the internet!!!! Hope u become famous! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com I think it is pretty cool, little dark & twisted I like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com GOOD!. click on http://www!.poem7!.com to submit in contest for big cash prizes,Good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com |