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Question: I need an ending to my poem + feedback!?
i need a final stanza (2 lines, following rhyme pattern etc!.)
also, feedback please :)
The Battle is Looming
The battle is looming
For those who succumb
Their voices are booming
Like an endless drum
The anger is fuming
Making all near feel glum
And those who are assuming
It shall be won
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Chaos is consuming
and making them numb!.
i tried lol!.
i like your poem so far!.
good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com
And won it will
as dawn is near
The sun breaks the battle fair
a smell of dead
A rifle there
And true to form
And never more
the battle endsWww@QuestionHome@Com