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Question: I need an ending to my poem + feedback!?
i need a final stanza (2 lines, following rhyme pattern etc!.)
also, feedback please :)

The Battle is Looming

The battle is looming
For those who succumb

Their voices are booming
Like an endless drum

The anger is fuming
Making all near feel glum

And those who are assuming
It shall be won
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Chaos is consuming
and making them numb!.

i tried lol!.

i like your poem so far!.
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And won it will
as dawn is near

The sun breaks the battle fair
a smell of dead
A rifle there

And true to form
And never more

the battle endsWww@QuestionHome@Com