What do you hear in the silence?

Question: What do you hear in the silence!?

What do you hear in the silence!?
Does some one call your name
as the golden sun rises and sets,
Do winds whisper in your ear
upon a cool spring breeze
as green leafs dance on large old trees,
Do you hear the flutter of butterflies wings
the buzz of a bee!.
On the rise of the moon in a star lit sky
over ocean blue at neap of tide,
Sh-hush, listen to the silence,
Does it call your name!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Jenny, this is a very beautiful poem!. This was my favorite line, it put a lovely picture in my mind!!:

"Do winds whisper in your ear
upon a cool spring breeze
as green leafs dance on large old trees"Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have something special started here but it needs refinement to make it a gem!. Line 2 and3 for example: how can it be someone is calling your name all day as the line implies: golden sun rises and sets!? Line 8: the buzz of a bee transitions into the rise of the moon!? Bees are active when!? The only other thing to maybe think about is another name for golden sun which seems pedantic!. Now that I have picked it apart, once again let me tell you that this is very nice and deserves the extra effort to really make it shine!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

in silence i hear nothing but the whispers of my mind,
sometimes they are hurtful others they are kind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes, yes it does!. beautiful work!. ^-^Www@QuestionHome@Com