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Question: Truth!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
Truth
is the light that breaks apart darkness
springs from the depth
of a down trodden soul

Truth
marches along long fields of winding shadows
out of an abyss
the cursed black hole

Truth
is a shower of raining stars
hailing down from the heavens
it covers the earth
makes is gold

Truth
more desirable then many white diamonds
it is the thing we search for
a thing we prize
the thing we hold!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
OMG, I love it!. It is so full of imagery and emotion!. I love the different views of truth and the way we don't always view it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love it!

a little advice!.!.!.change the word 'long' to something else!.!.!.it makes the reader trip over the line, 'marches along long!.!.!.'

great read!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i liked it, i liked the arrangement, but spend more time on punctuation and spelling, nice poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

Truth
always comes with goosebumps!.!.!.

thanks for this :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it!. its awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

OK!.!.!.!? There aren't any ryming words in it!.!?!.!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

lovin it =]Www@QuestionHome@Com