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Position:Home>Poetry> A Poem - Just A Memory - Do You Like?Question: A Poem - Just A Memory - Do You Like!? We walk with hands joined
and legs in tandem Gulls form a halo following our path Ocean breezes vie for kisses on sand The softness beneath tempers our stepping Lazy days are favored embraces As the sun departs and meets the ocean We will continue our loving journeyWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I know the place!. Beautiful poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I have been there and walked in that same sand with someone special!. No, not Marguerite, her name was Cecilia, and was know to all as Sissy!. We walked and talked until midnight, had a goodnight kiss, and never saw the other again!. Thank you for the memory!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes, I do like it- I just love it!. It has tenderness and romance in the sensitive images, created from this lovely memory of yours!. I especially think "Gulls form a halo!.!.!.following our path" is a graceful image!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Its good, but way too predictable!. I've heard stuff like this over and over and while I can relate to the emotions in this poem, I feel like words can never completely embody them!. It is too commonly usedWww@QuestionHome@Com Walk on for the nights are even better!. A nice memory opened with your words!. Poems easy will never go out of favor!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes! very refreshing, Lovely line, "Lazy days are favored embraces!."Www@QuestionHome@Com It's a beautiful, tranquil, and loving memory!. We should all have memories like this one!. Thank you for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com A great picture of a loving couple, well said!. mine is woodlands and sun rise!.Very good, I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com So peaceful and beautifully written my friend <3Www@QuestionHome@Com I like this!. Keep it how you wrote it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I like your poems!. It is a poem my memory would cherish!. Thanks for sharing!. Have a great day!Www@QuestionHome@Com omg it sounds so romantic lol i love itWww@QuestionHome@Com love it! you have talentWww@QuestionHome@Com yes its beautiful!.!.even though i dont understand half of what your saying =))Www@QuestionHome@Com |