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Question: Give me honost thoughts!?
ive been getting into poetry again!.i wrote these these poems a while back!.so give me ur honost opinions!.thanx
to say i love you
is to say im there for you
to never let you fall
and never let you brawl
to say i love you
is to always make you smile
through the good times and the bad
its to never make u mad
to say i love you
is to take you by the hand
to write your name in the sand
and be there when you land!.
true love is good
yet at times it is blue
true love is hard
yet it's the easiest thing ive ever done
true love makes me say
and sometimes it makes me mad
it makes you run through my mind
and it occupys all my time
true love makes me wanna scream
but its the same thing that makes me beam
true love is you
true love is me
true love is what we're gonna be
Alternative ending:
true love is what we'll never beWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
to be honest um the second one is okay!.
i am a writer!.
but they are not all that deep and they dont really have much depth to me!. love is such a over written subject mix up the words don't use love as much and i like the other ending better!.
and i don't really like the first one its kind of uneasy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The first poem is touching! Very nice a true classical poem that seems to reflect the importance of simplicity!. Your ability not to complicate the mind yet project a powerful voice!. It is touching! Keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's good, But you can come up with better rymes if you really want to rhyme!.!.but I like poems that don't ryme alot better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
cutee:DWww@QuestionHome@Com
thats amazingWww@QuestionHome@Com
Try cooler rhymes!.
www!.rhymezone!.comWww@QuestionHome@Com
The poem is very good!. :] Keep it up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like your UNselfish view of love!.
Good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com
they sound good but it sounds like a highschool girl made it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow!.!.!.!.!.that's really good!. As much as I hate to admit it!.!.!.it touches me a little bit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
pretty and deep!! good job=]Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like it keep it up =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
awwwwwwww!
i love it!
how cute=]
i personally think you write very nicelyWww@QuestionHome@Com