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Question: What do you think of this poem!? (You Don't Love Him)!?
You know you can survive
when you love him so
and he doesnt look at you twice
and he doesn't know

but there's something so painful
and you dont know how to begin
when you have to admit
that he loves you
but you dont love him!.

and he looks in your eyes,
so defeated, so raw
and you begin to wish you'd kept living the lie
and not told him at all!.

God, you just want him to hate you
but he loves you yet
though you tear his heart apart
he wont let you forget!.

And somebody tells you
to hold on a little longer
so you lead him on
and make the hurtful lie
a little stronger!.

God, how can I look at him
when he looks at me
and loves me even though
the lie is all he sees!?

Something, so sweet
something so deep
and now so lonely
leaving only room to weep

No, dont look back
you'll see me breaking your heart again
and the only question
you have left, is
When!?

You dont know how to answer
when his eyes go vague and dim
but he still tells you that he loves you
and he knows you dont love him!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
very good!. i like it!.!.!. a lot!. :D keep writing!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Should be set to music!.

Thumbs up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

sad but trueWww@QuestionHome@Com